just posted ch5! hurrah!
So, I just posted the revised version of Ch1 & Ch2 to OOTB! I didn’t change much, except for a bit of the scenery and added a lot more of Albe’s commentary about Megan, Paul, etc. I hope you guys still like it :)
OK, OK I know I haven’t been as faithful of a writer to “One of the Boys” as I should be, and I truly do apologize. I’ve just (well, not just but about a month ago) completed my last year of high school, and have been one busy bee since my last OOTB update! So once again, I apologize for the neglect. However, now that I have a little more time on my hands, I am going to attempt to revive the story from it’s one year hiatus and start on the long awaited Chapter 4! Hurrah!
Now, before I begin on Ch4, I might revise the previous 3 chapters, since I feel as if I could add a lot more into them. Things like Albe’s snide remarks, Megan’s optimism — I think I should build the supporting characters alot more. But don’t fret, the edits should make the story more readable and enjoyable than it already is. :)
Well, without further delay, I will continue penning OOTB and will have pictures of the new and improved “cast” of the story up shortly!